Ideas
There were some nice ideas in there but I think you could have gelled it together better. It seemed a tad fragmented.
I was really digging that melody that starts at 1:05
Ideas
There were some nice ideas in there but I think you could have gelled it together better. It seemed a tad fragmented.
I was really digging that melody that starts at 1:05
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A Long Song Indeed
I like how you told a story and the chords are nice n stuff, though it doesn't really feel like it's going anywhere. The vocoder melody didn't really engage me either (though that's maybe just the robot being robotic, heh).
Lastly in the singing bit, it goes way out of tune in places!
It's either a love it or hate it song. Judging by the drastic rise and fall in ratings over the last day, I'd say it leans more towards hate. But I guess I'm right there too! I really don't think this is my best song, not even close. You should check out some of my other songs, like Land Locked, or Torngia!
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Age 35, Male
Sydney, Australia
Joined on 7/20/09